Illustration by Howard Pyle |
Arthur watched as his foster brother prepared for the
tournament. His foster father was
fussing with his armor. Arthur shook his
head and continued to saddle up the horses.
This was the second tournament this year, and the year was only three
months in. It was tiring work, but he
enjoyed it. He never actually
participated himself, but he helped Kay practice some times. He wasn’t particularly good yet, but he was
slowly getting better at it.
“Arthur!” His head
snapped up from his work and looked toward the voice that had called him.
“Do you need help with something Kay?” His foster brother walked towards him
quickly. With all the armor in place, he
was a bit clumsy as well. When he
finally stopped in front of him, he struggled to stand up straight under the
weight of the armor.
“I need a sword.”
“A sword?”
“A sword.”
“Okay, but why? Didn’t
you just have one?”
“Well, yes. But it
broke. Don’t we have a back-up?”
“That was the back-up.
You lost the other on the way here.”
“What? What kind of
squire only has one back-up sword?”
“That’s all your father told me to bring. Can we go buy one quickly? Surely one of the vendors have something
sufficient.”
“No, none of the vendors here will do. They charge outrageous prices for shoddy
craftsmanship. From what I saw this
morning, the vendor next to the inn we are staying at has a decent select. Can you run down there before the tournament
starts?”
Arthur looked at Kay incredulously. The inn was nearly a thirty minute trek from
the tournament. They didn’t have that
kind of time. The tournament was meant
to start soon. Kay looked at him
impatiently.
“Well?” Arthur shook
his head at his foster brother.
“I’ll see what I can do.”
With that Arthur took off in the direction of the inn. Ten minutes into the trip, he came across the
church. It wasn’t much of a church really. It was a small building with a caved in
roof. There was a small cemetery
situated next to it. Most of the grave
stones were crumbling. Only a few stones
were still fully standing. In fact, one
of them was an actual stone rather than a grave marker. Of all the things that could have possibly
caught his attention, it was this little, dilapidated church.
He stopped for a second before moving closer. It wasn’t until he stood right in front of
the church that he really took notice of the stone. Though there was not much sunlight, a few
small beams caught on something and cast a glint his way. He walked towards it until he was standing
right next to it. With his right hand,
he reached out towards it. Once his hand
was wrapped around whatever was sticking out of the stone, he realized what it
was. It was dirty, but it was unmistakably
the hilt of a sword. Of all things, he
had found a sword stuck inside of a stone.
Author's Note:
I chose to write about this particular story of King Arthur because it is one of the ones that I am the least familiar with and I wanted to explore it some. I took a class on Arthurian legends, so this was a unit I was really eager to read and work on. I didn't change much, but I did go farther in depth with the story. I also left off with Arthur finding the stone because I felt like everyone knows the rest of the story, and I felt like it would make an interesting cliffhanger.
King Arthur: Tales of the Round Table by Andrew Lang, illustrated by H. J. Ford (1902).
Hey Nicole! I think you did a great job with your story this week! I love stories about King Arthur and your story was very enjoyable to read. The story flowed very well and was easy to read. I like your decision to leave off the ending. The cliffhanger was perfect. Good job, and I look forward to reading more of your stories!
ReplyDeleteWow Nicole! This story was so good! Your story was very well written and very easy to read. I was very stunned by the cliffhanger but I thought it was very creative! I too enjoy writing and rewriting about stories I am familiar with. I look forward to reading more of your stories as we wrap up the semester! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteI liked this story and how you connected it to the original! I liked the idea of Arthur being a help/brother to the real character of the story and how he made something of himself. I am familiar with the story you chose to retell and was glad that you kept the part about the sword until the end!
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful. I like all the little details you used to flesh out this scene. The dialogue was enjoyable, too. You still have some spacing issues, so you need to be careful about that. Remember, your blog has small text and spaces between paragraphs will help out your reader a lot!
ReplyDeleteIt’ll help if you preview what your post to see what it looks like before you post it – do that and then ask yourself: “Is this easy to read?” Remember to be kind to your readers.
Other than that, I still enjoyed this story. Well done.